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Write at least 60 words on the topic“Weekend or Not?” according to the information given.（阅读以下内容，并以“这是汤姆的周末吗？”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
如今，很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末，如下图中的Tom，请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法，以Weekend or Not?为题写一篇不少于60个词的英语短文，向Parents杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发。
例文
Nowadays, it’s common phenomenon that students’ weekends are as busy as weekdays, which are filled with plenty of homework, hobby groups and cramming classes. Let’s take Tom’s weekend as an example. Besides doing homework, he also has to attend maths class, singing class, drawing class and so on. This makes Tom stressed a lot.
From my perspective, weekends are supposed to be relaxing. On one hand, after five days’ study, there is a great need for students to take a rest at weekend. On the other hand, over study does harm to their physical and mental health. Instead of studying, it is a good choice to do exercise or go outing with parents and friends at weekends. Just as the saying goes “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. I believe proper relaxing enables them to be healthy and study better.
Write at least 60 words on the topic “This was my promise"(请以“这就是我的承诺"为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格.)
承诺是一份责任,也是一种素养.在你的成长过程中,对家人、老师、朋友、同学和社会有过哪些与承诺有关的经历和感触呢?请结合自己的个人经历,选取一个角度, 讲述一个具体事例.
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分.标点符号不占格)
The following is for reference only (以下表述仅供参考)
1.be responsible for...
2.promise (sb.) that...
3.make/keep/break one's promise
例文
As far as I can remember, one of the promises I have made so far was that I would cook a meal for my family. At the beginning, I even had no idea of what to buy, let alone how to cook. But I didn't give up, I started to make preparations for my promise.
To begin with, I asked my family members about their favorite food. After that, I searched the internet for suggestions on how to cook these food. Then I went to the nearest supermarket to buy all kinds of vegetables and meat. At last, it took me about 2 hours to successfully cook a meal for my family, and they were all surprised by what I did!
To keep your promise is not as easy though, you will be proud of yourself once you make it happen.
Write at least 60 words on the topic “I admire myself.”（以“夸夸我自己”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
提示：为了给初中四年的学习生活留下美好的回忆，你们班级策划了一次主题班会。要求每位同学以“夸夸我自己”为题，用一至三个形容词概括自己的优点，并通过举例子或列举理由加以说明。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）
例文
There is no doubt that personality varies from person to person. I admire myself due to several advantages.
First of all, I am kind and warm-hearted. When my classmates meet difficulties in life, I usually give them a hand. What’s more, I am independent. I do washing and cook on my own. I can look after myself well instead of depending on my parents. I will try my best to be a better person.
Write at least 60 words about the topic “That time, I really felt worried”(请以“那一次，我真的感到很担心”为题， 写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格)
在你的学习和生活中，你一定解决过一度令你感到担心的事情，请你描述担心的事情是什么，为什么担心以及最后又如何解决的。
（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其相关信息，否则不予评分）
例文
Each of us worries about something, and at that time, we thought we couldn’t overcome it. However, it turns out that we can figure it out anyway.
There was a speech contest in my class when I was in Grade 8 and I really felt worried as I had no idea how to speak naturally in front of all my classmates. I had practised a lot but when the very moment was coming, I was still so nervous that I cannot stop shaking. I was worried about forgetting words, acting strange, and being laughed at by others.
I told my best friends about my worries and all I got was “So what?” These two words gave me courage and made me calm down. So what? It was not the end of the world and even if I failed this time, I could still get another chance. Then I took a deep breath and was ready to give my speech.
The result, as you might have guessed, was that I finished my speech like, perfectly. And from then on, I understood that how important it is that one should be confident and brave.
Write at least 60 words on the topic “I learned to be______through a school activity” 以“通过一次学校活动我变得...”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。
提示：初中四年你一定参加了不少学校活动，也从中学到了不少东西，请就其中一次活动的经历和收获写一篇短文。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其他相关信息。）
例文
I learned to be responsible through a school activity
There is no doubt that every one has taken part in varieties of activities in the past four year, which have a great effect on us.
In fact, I leaned a lot from those activities, especially a social survey we did. Last term, our teacher asked us to do a social survey about environment protection and I was assigned as the team leader. To begin with, I didn’t know where to start and how to do a survey. When I was about to give up , I saw my teammates, who showed their trust on me. I suddenly realized as a leader I should try my best to lead my team to complete the task. With the help of my teacher and teammates, we did a wonderful survey. From then on , I learned that I should be responsible.
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Sharing”. （根据中文提示，以“分享”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
提示：生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的经历，如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法、一次美好的旅行……，结合你自己的生活体验，描述一次你与他人分享的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
例文
It’s very important to learn to share with each other. I have many things to share in different ways. For example, I can share some beautiful pictures, favorite music, different ideas with others face to face or by QQ e-mail which are widely used. Now I’d like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you. Emily was lonely and unhappy. I hoped to cheer her up. So I shared my favorite books and chatted with her after class. As time went by, she became used to sharing her feelings with me. Now we’re good friends. In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up. We can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.
Write at least 60 words on the topic “How lucky I am to have _________”（以“我多么幸运能够拥有__________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格，请在答题纸上把作文标题补充完整，如：a true friend， a warm family， an interesting book……）
在学习和生活中你可能因为拥有一位真诚的朋友、一个温暖的家、一本有趣的书等等而感到幸运，请选取一个方面谈谈自己的亲身经历，并说明为何感到幸运。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不子评分。）
The following is for reference only（以下表达仅供参考）
be satisfied with
encourage sb. to do sth
do sb. a favor
with the help of
例文
How lucky I am to have my family
How lucky I am! I have the best parents in the world. My mother cooks meals for me every day. She always spends money buying things that I like best. My father takes me to the school and takes me home every day. I know he must be tired, but he never says that. When I am happy, they look happier than me. When I feel bad, they stay beside me and make me happy again. They give all that they have to me. I want to say to them loudly, "I love you, and I am lucky to be your child"
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My Ideal Weekend”.(以“我理想的周末”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following questiongs as a reference(以下问题仅供参考）
1）What's your weekend like?
2）What’s your ideal weekend like?
3）Why do you want a weekend like that?
(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）
例文
My ideal weekend
As I’m always busy with different kinds of schoolwork during the week,an ideal weekend for me would be a leisurely and carefree one with a lot of fun.
On Friday, I would like to do some sports with my friends after class. Either playing basketball with serval friends or jogging alone is a good way to relax myself.After that, I would rush back to my dormitory as fast as I can to take a hot shower.
On Saturday ,I would go to my favourite restaurant to have some Sichuan food.After lunch,going to the cinema would be a good choice for me.In the evening , it would be a enjoyment for me to surfing on the internet with my laptop settled on my bed,before I am too tired to stay up.
When it comes to Sunday, I would get up early in the morning to finish my homework. If there would be enough time,I would read some books which I am interested in.This is my ideal weekend.
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “I am no longer a little child ” 以“我不再是一个孩子”为题写一篇至少60字的短文。
背景：如今， 我们的父母一方面对我们百般呵护， 一方面又时常抱怨我们长不大。请给你的父母写一封信， 证明你不再是一个孩子了 （开头和结尾已经给出，不计入字数）。
The following is for reference only （以下表达和图片仅供参考）
※ used to
※ make me
※（be）full of
（注意：信中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
【例文】
I am no longer a little child
Dear parents,
As a junior three student, I think I have grown up and I’m no longer a little child. In the past, I always asked you to do something for me and never thought about whether you were tired and busy. But now I can do almost everything myself and even help you do housework. I used to be shy but now I can talk to the strangers. In a word, I am no longer a little child. Thank you for always caring for me.
Yours
Linda
There is a section “My Volunteer Work” in the school newspaper. The editor wants good articles to be collected. Please write at least 60 words on the topic. 学校校报有“我的志愿者工作”这一栏目。编辑想收录好的文章登载。请写写你的志愿者工作。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）
例文
My Volunteer Work
When I was a little child, my parents taught me that I should take part in volunteer work as much as possible in the future. I used to work in the Pets’ House. It’s actually a volunteer organization to help the abandoned or homeless cats and dogs. So we take those poor animals back to the Pets’ House and feed them. Sometimes they are seriously ill, so we would take them to the hospitals. We take very good care of them and help them grow healthily. Then, we will post their pictures and information on the Internet, so that someone who are warm-hearted can come to adopt them. Therefore, these cute creatures can eventually have a real home. I’m doing these because I love pets so much and I think helping these poor animals is very meaningful to the whole society. I enjoy doing this and I will continue doing it. Wish everyone can join us and help these lovely animals together!
Suppose you are Mark. You witnessed a crime. Write a diary in 60-120 words about it. (假设你是马克，你看到一起犯罪活动，就你所见所为写一篇60-120 个词的日记，标点符号不占格。)
The following questions are for reference （以下问题仅供参考）
Who did you see?
When and where did you see them?
What were they doing?
How did you feel?
What did you do then?
【参考答案】
Saturday, November 11th
On a sunny morning, I walked my dog, Henry. When I went past a garage, I witnessed a crime. Two men were busy painting, while a man was replacing the number plate. All of them were so absorbed in their work that they did not notice a thief stealing their money. I saw the thief put the money into a big bag, and the money spread on the ground. I felt angry because the thief was so wild that he committed a crime in broad daylight. I could not let it go, so I went to police station to report the crime.
I was so proud of my bravery !
Write at least 60 words on the topic “ I tried my best to____”(以“我尽全力______了”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
每个人都有一段为实现自己某个目标而竭尽全力的经历，请你补全题目，介绍自己的某次拼搏过程并谈谈自己的所感所悟。
（注意：1.在答题纸上讲题目补充完整。
2.短文中不得出现真实人名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
例文
I tried my best to learn to smile
I once suffered a lot in the past. Every time I tried my best, but I failed at last, which made me upset. My friends always cheer me up and remind me to smile. From then on, I try to be more optimistc.
Nowadays, I always get in touble. I have no choice but to smile. After all, smile is an attitude towards life. As we all know, life is not always smooth and something sad will happen to us, such as failure in the exam, doubt from others. However, we should learn to smile. Smile makes us feel more confident. If we smile to the others, we will be much closer to our friends. Smile is the common language throughout the whole world that everyone can understand. Therefore, in order to make life better, just keep smiling to ourselves as well as to everyone around us. I believe I can do it by myself.
Write at least 60 words on the topic ＂My dream will come true“（以“我的未来不是梦”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
你对自己的未来一定有美好的梦想：但梦想的实现取决于勤奋、努力等诸多因素。请结合你自己的梦想，谈谈你将如何使美梦成真
The following words or phrases are only for reference．（以下词或短语仅供参考）
My dream is to be/do with the help of.
come true take part in
hardworking realize
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
例文
My dream will come true
There is no doubt that every person has a dream. Some people may want to be a superstar and others are willing to be rich men. But my dream is to be a teacher just like my mom.
As we all know, nobody can gain success without continuous hardworking. In order to make my dream come true, I realize that I should take part in various kinds of activities which are organized by my teachers. It is a ability to get along well with kinds of students. What’s more, I know that if I want to be a teacher, I must be a person who has a good command of knowledge. With the help of my mom, I will be able to master the teaching skills in the future.
In brief, in order to realize my dream, I will spare no effort to study hard and when I have trouble and learn from my classmates as well as my teachers. I firmly believe that I can make it.
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “The most valuable lesson I’ve ever learned”（请以“我学到的最珍贵的一课”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following as a reference(以下内容仅供参考）
l Who or what gave you the most valuable lesson?
l Why do you think it is the most valuable lesson?
l What will you do after learning this lesson?
注意:
抄袭试卷中内容不得分。
文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
例文
The most valuable lesson I’ve ever learned
The most valuable lesson was given by my elder brother Steve who helped me grow into a responsible person.
Once when I returned in tears from a Saturday baseball game, it was Steve who took some time to ask me what happened. When I told him that my baseball had flown through neighbor's window, breaking the glass with a crash, Steve encouraged me to confess to her. After all, I was supposed to play baseball on the playground instead of in the path between buildings. Although my voice shook as I apologized to my neighbor, I offered to pay for the broken window from my pocket money.
This left me a deep impression and I’ve been taught to face the results of my behavior and shoulder the responsibility.
Write at least 60 words on the topic “Say ‘__________’to myself”（以“对自己说‘__________’” 为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
例文
I would like to say ‘cheer up’ to myself because the entrance examination is coming and it has exerted such an unbearable burden on me that I sometimes fail to feel the joy from study and see the beauty in life. Exams, for my perspective, are simply a form of evaluation. The process of gaining knowledge is the most important. As a result, there is no need crying over an unsatisfactory score as long as we have already mastered the knowledge. Besides, participating in extracurricular activities is equally necessary simply because it enables us to develop in an all-round way. In conclusion, a positive attitude towards study makes our life color and meaningful.
Write at least 60 words on the topic ”_______makes me full of fun.”(以“_____使我的生活充满乐趣”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格)
初三的生活虽然紧张，但学习体验，集体生活，兴趣爱好……能为我们带来很多欢乐。请选取一个方面，结合自身经历，他如何使你的生活充满乐趣。
The following is for reference only:
*Be fond of
*Take part in
*Enjoy oneself
例文：
Reading makes me full of fun
Nowadays, the pace of everyday life is faster than before. Most modern people are anxious living. However,I have entertainments to relax myself. One of them is reading.
During my childhood, Mom always told me stories before I went to bed.They were so interesting that I loved them right away.With the passing of the years,I grew up and learned thousands of words.To my great joy,I was soon able to read books by myself.As soon as I finished my homework,I always chose a book and sat in front of my desk to enjoy it.
I’m fond of reading novels, and my favorite is “Harry Potter.”.In addition to Harry Potter book,I enjoy reading magazines, newspapers and so on in my free time. Reading not only makes me happy but also gives me plenty of information and knowledge as well. Never do I feel bored or tired when reading.
Although life in the fourth year of junior middle school is full of pressure, I’m as carefree as a bird because of reading. I’ll treasure the joy of reading forever.
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