高考英语在线辅导(方法指导)

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摘要:张同冰高考英语书面表达写作步骤如下:第一步:审题确定主题句、主体时态 (一般以现在时态为主)和中心人称。第二步:草稿在主题句后按提示顺序将各要点以完整的句子表达出来。1.打结构:结构就是你打算分几段写,每段都写什么?哪段转哪段承哪段起合?2.关键词:结构拟定后,

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「方法指导」高考英语书面表达写作四步法

高考英语书面表达写作步骤如下:

第一步:审题

确定主题句、主体时态 (一般以现在时态为主)和中心人称。

第二步:草稿

在主题句后按提示顺序将各要点以完整的句子表达出来。

1.打结构:

结构就是你打算分几段写,每段都写什么?哪段转哪段承哪段起合?

2.关键词:

结构拟定后,迅速在草稿纸上写下自己这篇作文可能用到的一些关键词。包括一些漂亮的词和自己可能会忘记的词。主要是动词和名词。

3.草拟句式:

词写下来了,其实你构建这篇作文的建筑材料就到位了。先用最普通的陈述句把它们在头脑中过一遍,然后看看都能改成什么句式。能不能把一句陈述句改成问句?能不能用上一个双重否定句?能不能用一个主语从句套定语从句的长句?能不能用一个插入语?等等。把你高中三年的英语积累展示出来。

第三步:成文

用过渡词将上下文的逻辑关系体现出来。

常用词有:

①表示时间:now, then, afterwards, soon, five minutes later,  before long, shortly after that, soon after supper, to this day, just now, just then

②表示顺序、动作过程:first, firstly, first of all, second, secondly, at first, at last, next

③表示转折:but, yet, and yet, however, although, otherwise, in spite of

④表示结果:thus, therefore, so, as a result, seeing that, luckily, unfortunately

⑤表示强调: above all, indeed, surely, certainly, of course, after all, without any delay, at least, at most

⑥表示并列: and, also, as well as, and then

⑦表示递进: besides, what's more, in addition, even, once more, what was worse

⑧表示解释和说明: that is to say, namely, for example, actually, and so on, such as, believe it or not,  to tell you the truth,  according this, for this reason

⑨表示比较、对比: just like, just as, in the same way, more or less, sooner or later, on the contrary, on the other hand

⑩表示总结: finally, in conclusion, in a word, in general, generally speaking, in short, as you know, in the end …需要注意的是:使用上述过渡性词必须根据上下文需要的原则,力求自然,决不可牵强附会,让人感觉别扭。

第四步:检查

即使考场时间再紧,请务必留下1—2分钟检查作文的时间,消除隐性错误。

尤其要注意以下几点:

1、是否有一个漂亮的开头,

2、是否有一个有力的结尾,

3、是否有2-3个高级词汇,

4、是否有1-2个漂亮的句子,

5、检查信息是否用完、是否做了适当发挥?

6、主谓是否一致、时态运用是否正确、语法是否正确?

7、单词拼写是否正确、大小写正确与否等是否有错

8、是否有语法错误?(名词单复数?动词时态?)

9、字迹是否清晰?卷面是否整洁?

附:高考满分作文(2004 全国一卷)Dear Peter,It was reported in today's newspaper that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners' Talent Show will be held in Beijing VT Station on July 18. As far as I'm concerned, you are in Beijing during that period. Why not take this rare opportunity to present your singing talent? It is also a favorable chance to see how well you've learned Chinese. You are supposed to sign up before the end of June if you would to have a try. I would be more than glad to help if there is anything I can do for you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua

(2004 全国二卷)Dear Andy,I'm delighted to be told that you are to visit China and will stay at my home. Both my parents and I are very pleased to have you with us. Here, let me brief you on our arrangement for you when you are here in China. To the best of my knowledge, the school will have a lot of activities for you to do in the morning. In the afternoon, however, I will lead you around and take you to some places of interest. Mostly in the evening, we will stay at home, watching TV, playing games and visiting friends. I'm convinced that you will have a wonderful time and enjoy each other's company.I'm looking forward to meeting you at the airport soon.Yours ever, Li Hua(2005 全国二卷)June 3, 2005Dear Editor,Recently, we have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. Opinions are divided into two groups. Some of my classmates hold the view that the Zoo should be moved out, because crowds of tourists to the zoo will lead to traffic jams, but they also think that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. Other students, never the less, don't agree with the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of a century, and enjoys a good reputation at home and abroad. In their opinion, the Zoo should remain where it is. In addition, it is a big decision which has to be made by the law makers in Beijing.Yours faithfully,Li Hua(2006 全国二卷)Dear Sir/ Madam,My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.I am a boy/ girl of seventeen at high school now. I am good at English and I can talk with foreigners fluently and without a stop. I'm convinced that I will do a very good job for the Games. In the first place, I like sports and I'm familiar with the place very well. Second, I am easy-going, easily getting alone with others, which is vitally important and necessary for a volunteer. Last but not the least important, I'm ready to give help whenever it is needed. My promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the Games.I would appreciate it if you could take time and consideration, and I'm looking forward to your early response.Yours ever,Li Hua上面几篇文章都有一些共同的特点:内容充实,要点全面;语言丰富,文字优美;行文连贯,思路清晰,过渡自然,均为满分作文。我们认为,考生要想在高考写作中取得理想的分数,必须明确高考写作考查的形式。

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2021-11-28

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